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It seems a miss communication is at fault and this game is still behind a paywall.

That being said, I’ve paid the minor sum required, and found it to be an excellent adventure module.

Really impressive work. 

All good. These things happen.

I respect your right for payment for your work. 

As per the link above, the author claims that those judging this can download for free. Would anybody be able to advise how this is done? 

I completely respect the authors right to charge for their work, but if it is to be judged in this jam, I am currently unable to rate this submission.

I'm currently rating the submissions, and am not aware of where or how to download for free.

On page 11, activating Scroll of Speak to the dead, you mention rolling an 'Arcana check'.  Was this supposed to be 'Intelligence check'?

Mate, this was pretty decent.  I f’n love it.

I’m used to Ocker Aussie stuff each time I see Australian outback settings, but thankfully this was made for those that have gone bush and have shared a yarn around a campfire.

Things that made this extra special for me is where you know where to push the Australian colloquialisms, and where to not go too far.  i.e. You’ve got the Drop Bear and Bin Chicken, but you didn’t make the kangaroo into a boxing kangaroo.  You’ve hit the sweet spot, and have gained yourself a fan.  Bonus points that thankfully there is no mention of a Billabong or a Matilda.

You’ve hit the sweet spot, and have gained yourself a fan.

Great game, brilliant work that you’ve done on the story, maps, and the tables.

Any chance you could put a better font for reading in there.  If you google “easy to read fonts” or “fonts for dyslexia” you’ll pick up on what I mean.  Anything sans serif.  The Shadowdark RPG book does this well.

Apart from this cosmetic suggestion, you’ve done really well, and I can see the thought and effort that you’ve put in.  I particularly like the Cursed Items table.